My Play!

I wrote a play! It is a mystery. I have a work in progress romantic play, but is is only half done. Here is my play.

ACT 1

N: Once upon a time, there lived some beautiful princesses who owned a very precious jewel. They put the jewel into a glass dome in their castle. They thought it was so safe that no one could steal it. THEY WERE WRONG!!!! DUN, DUN, DUN!!!

Bang: Come on Smite! We need to get to the gem room!

Smite: Calm down, we don’t want to look suspicious.

Bang: Ok, you’re right. I will go start on the distraction.

Smite: Good, I will go get the gem.

N: Once into the gem room, Smite found a way to open the dome.

Smite: The jewel! I finally got it!! (Speaking into a walkie talkie) Bang, create the distraction!

Bang: (speaking into the walkie talkie) Ok. (yell) FIRE!!!!!!

N: During the confusion of the fake fire, Smite and Bang walked out of the castle with the gem.

ACT 2

Lily: The Jewel! It’s Gone!!!!

Rose: WHAT?!?!? How could someone steal it?!

Detective Sasha Hansen: I think I might know. Your glass dome has been sawed in half. That is how it got out of the dome.

Jasmine: The question is who? Lily, Rose, did you see any suspicious people?

Rose: No, not at all.

Lily: I saw the man who screamed fire, but I don’t know who he is.

DSH: Can you describe him?

Lily: Yes, he was short and seemed young

Jasmine: Did he look like this? (holds up a picture of dunkin)

Lily: Yes that’s him!

DSH: He is the henchman for an international jewel thief name Smite. He is Bang.

Rose: I recognize him. He has been staying in the penthouse suite in the hotel next to the castle. He is always with a big man, could that be Smite?

Jasmine: It probably is! Detective Sasha Hansen, could we catch them?

DSH: Only in one way. We need them to think of us as friends.

Rose: How should we do that?

DSH: I need them to become friends with you two. Can you do that?

BOTH: Ya

N: The princesses left to the hotel. They became friends with the thieves!

ACT 3

N: When the princesses got back to the hotel, Detective Sasha Hansen and Jasmine were there to explain the plan.

DSH: Now that you are friends, you can bring us so we can arrest them!

Rose: Ok, I will go Call Smite to ask him if we can bring you.

(On the phone) Hey Smite, can we bring some friends tonight?

Smite: ( On the phone) Ya, come over as soon as possible.

Rose:(On the phone) Ok, we will be over soon.

(not on the phone) Yes!! We’re in!

Lily: Yay!!!!

N: Once they got there, they were very friendly to Smite and Bang. Then Sasha said

DSH: Put your hands behind you back!!! You are under arrest for the theft of thousands of jewels!!

N: They caught the bad guys and put them in jail! And everyone else lived happily ever after. 

Tell me what you think!